I’m really liking the choruses, but the verses don’t have the same strength. They feel an awful like On and On too. The lyrics might be filler, but i love the concept, and i think it could work well.
The lyrics aren’t completely filler. There are some ideas there that I’d like to keep. I’m not particularly attached to this one. Just an idea or two that I wanted to toss up.
January 10th, 2008 at 2:50 am
I’m really liking the choruses, but the verses don’t have the same strength. They feel an awful like On and On too. The lyrics might be filler, but i love the concept, and i think it could work well.
January 10th, 2008 at 10:48 pm
The lyrics aren’t completely filler. There are some ideas there that I’d like to keep. I’m not particularly attached to this one. Just an idea or two that I wanted to toss up.