A Life Undone
So this song is the just written closer of the album. It’ll go in last and be pretty epic, as opposed to this demo version of it. This was recorded with my acoustic straight into my computer’s mic. No sweetening!
You don’t know what it’s like
to be the one
You ask my day was
I say I didn’t have one
’cause I’m in love with a girl
Who doesn’t love me back
Stop me if you’ve heard this one before
Two hundred dollars got me my own four door
It ain’t pretty but at least I don’t walk no more
At least I’ve got a job,
but they don’t know or appreciate what I’ve done
I said stop me if you’ve already heard this one.
You don’t know what it’s like
to be the one
Where there once was mud
The earth is cracked and done
But I’ve got health,
Despite the aching in my heart
You don’t know what it is to live a life undone….
July 26th, 2005 at 11:32 am
get a fucking orchestra in there somehow
July 26th, 2005 at 8:06 pm
This song kicks ass. Genius.
July 28th, 2005 at 12:21 am
hmm….an orchestra…..are we ready for the next step in our music making careers?
September 18th, 2005 at 10:01 am
this kinda sucks
September 24th, 2005 at 3:27 pm
I really like this & it doesnt blow–at least if you’re going to criticize have the gonads to say your name!!!!